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rebel love pt 2

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Ashley pov
“woah!!! Wait a second are you a wicca!” I shouted at her, she placed her hand on my mouth and looked worried around her “shut up! Idoit nobody knows it” she wishpered at me, she pulled her hand of my mouth and signed in relief when she knew nobody heard me. I looked at andy who was also surprised from what she told. “but why are you still here then” andy asked her. She looked down “ I don’t know, I have a feeling that if I leave I can’t survive” she said, I felt guilty for her, I looked surprised at her when she stood up.


Fallen pov
I stood up and looked at the sky, I saw all the stars clear and of course it was full moon today. “can I ask you a question prophet” I said to him, he stood also up with a bit help of the deviant and nodded at me “is the moon a sort of god for the outcast” he frowned his eyebrows and looked at the sky, his lips curled up in a beautiful smile “yeah, it is but we call her the black veil bride, she is our godness” I blinked twice, they have a female god! “not to be rude or anything but why do you have a female as a god” the prophet smiled at me “because we all believe that men and woman are not better then each other but even” I smiled at him and nodded. Suddenly I heard my dad “FALLEN!!! WATCH OUT FOR THOSE REBELS” I looked at the tower, “shit” I whispered. The deviant looked at the prophet and nodded “just play with us, oke were not going to hurt you” the deviant said to me, I nodded. The deviant pulled out his bow and arrow, and he shooted at me but it came by a little piece of fabric in my dress, I smiled at him and winked. Then I felt on the ground, like I fainted. I opened my eyes a bit to see the prophet and the deviant getting the others to escape I smiled at the prophet who looked at me, I could see the worry in his eyes “FALLEN!, are you alright, my daughter say something” my father said to me he lifted me up. And dragged me inside the temple.


Andy pov.
“ash, can you believe it that there is a wiccan in the temple’s”  ash looked at me and shook his head “ I don’t  really believe it andy, I mean how on fucking earth did she found the spells and if she is really a wiccan who doesn’t like the people of the temple, then why is she still their?” ash was right about that, how did she knows her spells and why is she still their. I really need to talk to her, tomorrow night I am going back to the temple to talk to her, maybe I can bring her here

I guess I wasn’t really focusing where I was going because I bumped into one of our massive water tanks. I felt on my back and grapped my nose who was bleeding, Ashley and jake rushed to me “what the fuck andy, normally you’re fucking sharp and then you see everything and no you bump into a water tank from like 8 feet” jake said, I signed they know me to well. Well jake brought me to his room/hospital I kept on thinking about that girl, I don’t even know her name! dam. I frowned my eyebrows and I swear jake has some special talent for knowing what’s going on in my mind. “andy for fuck’s sake tell what’s bothering you” he said while he looked at my nose. “there is nothing jake, really!” I lied, jake smirked “ your nose is broken, andy. And stop lying and tell me the real reason” he said I signed great! A broken nose and I have to tell about the girl. “…well, ash and some of the others…


Jake pov
When andy was done with explaining, I swear my eyes were about to pop out from surprise. “are you totally sure andy, that she has black hair and red eyes!” he just nodded, oke I’m going to find that stupid book. “why? Jake is something wrong” andy asked, I smiled at him “no, but I think I readed something about a red eyed girl with black hair in a book that has a lot of myths in it, only problem I don’t know were I left the book” I searched every fucking were but I couldn’t find it. Then I remembered were I left that book “it’s by chuppy!” andy looked confused and smirked “yeah right like cc is reading a book, that’s just like Ashley who is not drinking or having sex” I laughed from what andy said, he was kinda right, I mean cc never read books so why did he wanted that book.
yay part two :3 please comment what you think of it and please help me to make it better
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TerramArmsXIII's avatar
well well, a story! Not bad on this one, just space out the speech and action, easier to follow, some grammar erros, like.

"Shooted" or "Shot" other then that, it's good, coming together really well.